Pleeaeeee help me come up with a better conclusion!! And edit if needed.?

To make a flowing essay you need to have links between each paragraph and to make a good conclusion it should have references to each paragraphs. Also try to find some quotes to back up your statements. Then at the end of your essay have a section entitled References and write down all the books/websites you used to write your essay. In University were are told Wikipedia is not a valid source as it can be edited by anybody and also contains a lot of incorrect facts.