Sunday, August 14, 2011

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Yesterday I chatted online and on the phone with the boy that I have liked but before. Talking to him made me feel jovial. I first met him when we were fifty years old. He was very handsome with pale skin, thick eyebrows, a pair of obsidian eyes, a high-arched nose, and lips that were soft and bright red. He looked just like a prince who had come out of a fairy tale, it was very fascinating. We were never together, but he was the most beautiful memory of my youth.

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